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Felina's past by Saerl Felina's past by Saerl
My first "real" story completly in english xD Sorry for some spelling or grammar mistakes... I'm still learning ;D
I also used google translator sometimes ._. ;D
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The creamy doe walked through the area of Silverthorne, searching for some water while her herd
was waiting for her to come back. She would rather have went with somebody by her side, but the herd
asked for it and she was to shy to demand someone who comes with her.
She walked further, with her head down and watchful eyes. The forest with the small trees was silent,
she couldn't hear something... or someone. Suddenly she heard something growl and stopped
immediately. She looked carefully around and saw yellow eyes flashing and disappear. Felina became
nervous, because she knew that in the Silverthornearea were the most predators and they loved to hunt
Fawnlings. She walked ahead, always looking for the wolves, but they were like swallowed up by the
earth. She was still nervous and went into a fast trot and it was not long, as one of the wolves jumped
out of the protection of the forest in front of her. Felina was startled, reared and moved back where
another wolf threatened her. The whole pack came closer and Felina tried to get them away, defending
herself with her hooves and horn against the attackers. When she just focused on one wolf, the
others had a chance to attack. One wolf jumped on her back. Felina bucked that and he fell off her back on the
ground, but another wolf attacked her neck and touched it with his theeth. The doe screamed for
the other members of the herd, but no one heard her. Her will to live was stronger than the
wound on her neck or the wolves around her. She started to attack back with her head
down, her horn as weapon...
She fought until all wolves ran back into the forest. Felina had some wounds and scratches, but at that
moment she didn‘t care much about it. She just realized that she was not at home, the trees were bigger
and the gras was higher. She propably ran a bit to much, as the wolves had attacked...
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Affiliation: Silverthorne
Mate: N/a
Current Location: Alone in foreign forest

Stats
Starter points - 3
Gained points - 1
Speed - 3 (+1) = 4
Stamina - 2 (+1) = 3
Strength - 1 (+2) = 3
Experience - 1 (+1) = 2

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No Ref
Art and Fawnling © ME
Fawnlings © =Ehetere
Text corrected by *Darya87
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TigressDesign Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh no! Run Feline run!! Nice pic, and good story :)
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Saerl Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She ran... *looks at next picture* ;P
thank you *-* <3 for me itīs hard to write a whole story in english ._.
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TigressDesign Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You did really well. So much better than I could ever do in another language! I'd have to reply on a translator!
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Saerl Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :3
I used a translator sometimes (just for some words) and a page with irregular verbs ^^ ;D
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Cactus-sis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like the tense feeling that you've put for this pic, such as the detail with the wolf that is taking a leap towards Felina! And the pose for your lovely doe, even though she looks terrified, is really good! :la:
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Saerl Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aaww thank you soo much :aww: <3
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Cactus-sis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're so welcome, dear! :heart:
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Saerl Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:la:
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byrch Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The background if this is really cool! It looks like a fairy tale illustration!
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Saerl Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thank you *-*
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